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A.O. Avalon

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poetic exercise-- French painters

    I think, Boni, that you failed to take geography into account. And a single sentence does not a review make. So please don't waste my time unless you actually have ...

    Sep 27, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: a poem (warning, this piece has a lot of adult language)

    Qi right, Crys. We are debating whether or not his piece can be considered poetry. And I don't understand your concern. No one else is trying to change the topic ...

    Sep 20, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: a poem (warning, this piece has a lot of adult language)

    I looked up "poem" dear, you looked up "poetry". The definitions are actually different, which strikes me as odd. I'm not sure what you mean by Besides I'm sure you ...

    Sep 20, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: a poem (warning, this piece has a lot of adult language)

    The problem with your arguement Ere, is that you want opinion to decide the rule, when that simply won't work. For instance, the definition of music. Let's say our scenario ...

    Sep 18, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: AO's triumphant, but untitled, return

    It's a formatting thing, so I wouldn't loose the space between the stanzas, but I don't know why it showed up in my post. Oh well. thanks... I'm not the ...

    Sep 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: reflection in the calm waters of a bathtub

    Yeah I really have nothing but contempt for PoMo...

    Sep 9, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Prayer to Our Lady

    I'm not really digging my title, any suggestions?

    Feb 11, 2005
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Blue Lights (lyrics) (over 13)

    The "guest" message is actually me, i just wasn't logged in and was being confused by the new layout. so yeah.

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You and I

    yeah i don't like the "Children of..." line either, but i couldn't really come up with something else. any suggestions? eh yeah there's some definite cheese... guess that's just the ...

    Jan 15, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Alexis

    I'm "better than most?" Thanks In! And thank you Klaus and Sam...and K, I'm two seconds from posting a new poem in Dramatic... so there's the more work you wanted ...

    Jan 14, 2005
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The America Project

    Dispense means "to release" as well, so it's technically okay, but i could probably come up with a better word. And yes, the word is meant to be used alot... ...

    Jan 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Alexis

    Go back and look Gala. You'll see why the nanny needs a name. (hint: think repition.) Here's what I've been wondering about: Why does no one think it's strange that ...

    Jan 6, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sun Prophet Chapter 5-9

    . To a casual observer from afar, it would look like a shadowy dark construction on one side, but on the other a bright swelling market of colour and waking ...

    Dec 25, 2004
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Stories of the Ancients: Ferric (13+) [COMPLETE]

    Where are the next two chapters? *hunts*

    Dec 21, 2004
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Portrait of a Life

    I really like your title, that's what drew me to the poem in the first place. I'm really jealous, this is the poetry I always want to write and can't ...

    Dec 14, 2004


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